Nice Lincoln! I like the way you used the characters for dialogue. However, You didn't add anything at the end that says the man who punched her got in trouble. Good Job!
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Nice Lincoln! I like the way you used the characters for dialogue.
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Deletehey Lincoln I like the story but can you do writing and next time can you make sure it makes sense.
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